专稿“花好月圆杯”征文

原创古风三首：诗咏中秋佳节

文/李玉勋

一、

满月高悬照四方，此时华夏最安康。

亲人团聚心欢喜，挚友欣逢笑语扬。

共祝中秋皆把盏，同祈国泰与家昌。

诗讴岁岁今宵美，天地年年此夜彰。

二、

月明万古照苍天，华夏干秋庆贺圆。

户户灯光通达夜，家家笑语舞歌延。

共瞧玉亮心灵印，同饮琼浆情互连。

祈祷神州今夜好，人寰天上共婵娟。

三、

苍穹盘满亿秋嘉，璀璨千年照远涯。

楼阁亭台光影美，桂飘香气入吾家。

共瞧圆月杯高举，同享神州幸福花。

此夜人寰团聚喜，欢欣亲友话桑麻。

作者简介

李玉勋、陕西人，中共党员，本科学历，退休干部。执着热爱文学事业，曾任《教师报》等报刊杂志特约记者编辑。善写诗歌，累计撰写文章.诗歌3000多篇(首)，其中2000余篇(首)已在国内报刊平台发表，获得20多项殊荣。炎黄文学社签约作家，当代新诗苑特约诗人。

英文版

Three Original Ancient-style Poems: Poems Chanting the Mid-Autumn Festival

By Writer and Poet Li Yuxun

I.

The full moon hangs high, shining in all directions. At this time, China is the most peaceful and healthy.

Relatives gather, hearts filled with joy. Close friends meet, laughter and voices rise.

All wish to raise cups on the Mid-Autumn Festival, and pray together for the prosperity of the country and the family.

Poems praise the beauty of this night every year. Heaven and earth show it every year on this night.

II.

The bright moon has shone through the ages, lighting up the sky. China celebrates the roundness of the festival for thousands of years.

Every household's lights are on all night. Every family's laughter and singing continue.

All look at the bright moon and imprint it in their hearts. All drink the fine wine and connect their feelings.

Pray for a good night in China. People on earth and in heaven share the beauty of the moon together.

III.

The sky is full of the beauty of the autumn moon for billions of years, shining brightly for thousands of miles.

The pavilions and terraces are beautiful in the light and shadow. The fragrance of osmanthus floats into my home.

All look at the full moon and raise cups high. All enjoy the happy flowers of China.

This night, people on earth gather happily. Happy relatives and friends talk about farming. 

Author Profile

Li Yuxun, from Shaanxi Province, is a member of the Communist Party of China, holds a bachelor's degree, and is a retired cadre. He is passionate about literary undertakings. He used to be a special correspondent and editor for newspapers and magazines such as "Teachers' Newspaper". Good at writing poetry, he has accumulated more than 3,000 articles and poems, among which more than 2,000 have been published on domestic newspaper and platform, and has won more than 20 honors. He is a contracted writer of Yanhuang Literature Society and a special invited poet of Contemporary New Poetry Garden. 

诗评

诗咏中秋，情满华夏

作者/阳光

李玉勋先生的这三首古风诗以中秋佳节为主题，生动描绘了中秋夜的欢乐祥和、国泰民安的美好景象，抒发了对亲人团聚、友情长存、家国昌盛的美好祝愿，充满了浓郁的节日氛围和深厚的情感。

在第一首诗中，诗人以“满月高悬照四方”开篇，营造出明亮而广阔的意境，紧接着描绘了华夏的安康和人们的欢喜。“亲人团聚心欢喜，挚友欣逢笑语扬”，通过对亲人好友相聚时欢乐场景的刻画，传递出温暖的人情。“共祝中秋皆把盏，同祈国泰与家昌”，则将个人的欢乐上升到家国的昌盛，展现出一种宏大的家国情怀。尾联“诗讴岁岁今宵美，天地年年此夜彰”，以诗歌赞颂中秋夜的美好，使其永恒地彰显于天地之间，升华了主题。

第二首诗中，“月明万古照苍天，华夏千秋庆贺圆”，以明月的永恒映照华夏千秋的团圆庆贺，气势恢宏。“户户灯光通达夜，家家笑语舞歌延”，细腻地描绘了家家户户灯火通明、欢声笑语不断的热闹场景。“共瞧玉亮心灵印，同饮琼浆情互连”，强调了人们在同一轮明月下心灵相通、情谊相连。最后的“祈祷神州今夜好，人寰天上共婵娟”，既表达了对神州大地的美好祈愿，又呼应了“共婵娟”的传统意象，富有诗意。

第三首诗，“苍穹盘满亿秋嘉，璀璨千年照远涯”，以苍穹中满月的永恒美好开篇，给人以历史的纵深感。“楼阁亭台光影美，桂飘香气入吾家”，通过对周围环境的描写，增添了生活的温馨气息。“共瞧圆月杯高举，同享神州幸福花”，展现了人们共同赏月、共享幸福的欢乐。“此夜人寰团聚喜，欢欣亲友话桑麻”，以团聚的喜悦和亲友间的亲切交谈结尾，充满了人间烟火气。

总体而言，这三首诗语言优美，韵律和谐，情感真挚，用丰富的意象和生动的描写，将中秋佳节的欢乐、祥和、温馨展现得淋漓尽致，让读者充分感受到了中秋佳节的独特魅力和深厚内涵。