愿你们傲立天地，威武霸气
作词：苏德宏（中国山西）
有人有财，
傲立天地，
威武霸气。
有人有德，
傲立天地，
威武霸气。
有人有才，
傲立天地，
威武霸气。
我的亲人们，
愿你们成功，
傲立天地，
威武霸气。
我的朋友们，
愿你们成功，
傲立天地，
威武霸气。
我的乡亲们，
愿你们成功，
傲立天地，
威武霸气。
2026.06.09 题
🌹、中文点评
全诗句式整齐、回环往复，财、德、才三重立身之本依次铺陈，层层递进。反复复用“傲立天地，威武霸气”，节奏铿锵豪迈，气场十足。
从泛写世人，转而寄语亲人、朋友、乡亲，情感真挚热忱，把美好的祝愿融入铿锵字句里。全篇朗朗上口，既有昂扬的气度，又饱含温情，质朴又大气。
🔥 、英文翻译
May You Stand Proud Between Heaven and Earth
Lyricist: Su Dehong (Shanxi, China)
Some possess wealth,
Stand proud between heaven and earth,
Powerful and valiant.
Some possess virtue,
Stand proud between heaven and earth,
Powerful and valiant.
Some possess talent,
Stand proud between heaven and earth,
Powerful and valiant.
My dear kinsfolk,
May you achieve success,
Stand proud between heaven and earth,
Powerful and valiant.
My dear friends,
May you achieve success,
Stand proud between heaven and earth,
Powerful and valiant.
My dear townsfolk,
May you achieve success,
Stand proud between heaven and earth,
Powerful and valiant.
Written on June 9, 2026
❤ 、英文点评
This work features neat structure and rhythmic repetition. It takes wealth, virtue and talent as the core themes, conveying a bold and vigorous spirit. From general depiction to sincere blessings for relatives, friends and townsfolk, the poem is passionate and uplifting, easy to read and full of warm wishes.
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